Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

I'm back and writing again, and it feels fantastic! Today's teaser comes from the WIP aka Super Secret Novel #2. Actually, I've never called it that, but I kinda like it. I think I might call it that on here and Twitter just so I don't have to keep calling it the new WIP lol. Oh, right, the teaser.

This is from chapter 8, which I just finished last night bringing me to 20k+, and comes with no context whatsoever. I really, really like this passage, but I had to take only 2 lines from it so as not to give anything away, because I'm still trying to keep the premise hush-hush and all, kind of. Let me know what you guys think!

Where the Night Realm could leave a young mind twisted and broken, the Realm of Light could wipe one clean and leave nothing but a body smiling up at you. And some people called it Heaven.

Also, I've decided I can't stand waiting until I'm finished with the first draft to start looking for a critique partner; I really want some opinions from people who write on a regular basis. So if you're looking for a crit partner let me know and we might be able to work something out. Just a random side note. : )


Jen said...

Wow Amanada I'm very intrigued, I love these lines and I can't wait to see where you will be going from here! How mean of you to share so little!

Amanda P. said...


Talli Roland said...

Glad your writing's going well! Good luck!

Jemi Fraser said...

I like the teaser - sounds good!

Anonymous said...

You picked a good passage to tease us with.

Stephanie Thornton said...

Wow! That's definitely an intriguing hook!


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